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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Sure My heart is light, upon this rainy night Before the fire’s reflection, drawing closer Mesmerized in colors of the flames composure Melting from me, all that might conceal Depths of pure desire, everything I feel Puddles at my knees, trembling in the tease Recollection of your eyes, or just a dream I recognize That burns within, forging, gorging room to realize What spell do you possess that haunts me? Capture and caress, the very flame that taunts me The very blood let red, a crimson heat forever bed That brands the colors to my skin, as out; within And hidden from your view, that you would; as I do Remember warmly, through the tears, as years adorn me More than we each had ever felt before; a lasting light Summoning of spring through winter’s silent white I listen to the bell tap songs of season soaking tears So sure, your distant heart is all my own heart hears Copyright Kkh 1/7/07 |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I listen to the bell tap songs of season soaking tears So sure, your distant heart is all my own heart hears like a siren sound of great infinate knowing this spoke voices of impulse to the lover in you |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Well done  Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
Lovely write, Milady. MoonShadow . |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"Melting from me, all that might conceal Depths of pure desire, everything I feel Puddles at my knees, trembling in the tease" Very nice! Great write!! JL Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed: |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"Remember warmly, through the tears, as years adorn me More than we each had ever felt before; a lasting light Summoning of spring through winter’s silent white I listen to the bell tap songs of season soaking tears So sure, your distant heart is all my own heart hears" Fantastic write Kathleen..simply wonderful!  In the midst of winter, I found there lives within me.. An invincible summer. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"Puddles at my knees" TD I always find myself wishing I had thought of that great work! |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
just wonderful! RDB |
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trutodaraiders Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820CA |
Just a lovely, lovely write..~Bill |
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WindWalker Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218 |
This is one of your Best!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
magnificent write TD it speaks to me as rain falls on this desert night this lonely night |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
missed this one somehow, truly...an inspired write (or so I perceive it to be)...beautiful images and descriptive language...nicely done... |
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