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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced 
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Vision You say when you close your eyes, you see me. You say when you touch her, you close your eyes. The light came in early then and I could still hear you over the angry morning alone, exposed, but near you- a vision of our shadows long after you'd gone home to lay and close your eyes hidden away but not alone- and when I closed my eyes they filled with seas of sorrow hurrying the darkness that would justify tomorrow- The darkness comes in early now silence across the sun, in emptiness of you, I think what is it I should have done to save the vision from its demise, to prevent the oceans' turn to mist? I go home and close my eyes and I wonder if you exist. |
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trutodaraiders Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820CA |
I loved the poem,. Why and when I closed my eyes they filled with seas of sorrow hurrying the darkness that would justify tomorrow- |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
oh my!!  this is a beautiful piece of writing Dixie... girlfriend, just awesome! RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Beautiful , heartfelt and touching Hope |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
I wonder as well..... ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"and when I closed my eyes they filled with seas of sorrow" amazing work Dixie and the first two lines are awesome... |
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