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faint glows of daylight
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faint glows of daylight |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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Faint glows of daylight avalanched the eastern sky down wind free falling was naked silence wildly dancing along with the insane frenzy of the vein of a new day… boiling proud, then prouder, like applause I sat in obsess of this face of sunup thoughts running amuck like a lady searching aimlessly for some little girl that she cannot live without déjà vu grabbed me by the arm “yes”, I thought, “I am the slow motion incantation of another life” perhaps…. the next day skeptic continuing possibility or a child habitat for humanity, intimately wrapped around each and every moment that crawls through the undergrowth of my own traditional ways then like flashing red numbers on a digital clock scream “It’s time to get up” a child woman, howls through the silence with maternal instincts painting God, across this special time I know it was He, because of the forever feelings, that pierced my whole being charity removed it’s clothes and wrapped around me I’m sitting on a melody, waiting for the notes to write my life across the sky of song and there are times I still suck my thumb in those oceans of memories where the whispers sometime laugh but in this human world, I’m still holding onto that white robe of dreams inside thoughts I realize the benevolence of a thing and realize death I realize the sudden knock of life at my invisible door how many ways can one benefit from tragedy? My body prepared for the ceremony it was very early morning still when i awoke on a beach of endless tomorrows and those faint glows of daylight got up and walked with me, to the sea and that child and woman, formed a stronger bond, between them…they are now together through out eternity…an arrangement by the journey |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
1derful  Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
“yes”, I thought, “I am the slow motion incantation of another life” awesome work LeeJ |
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trutodaraiders Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820CA |
WOW. This poem just sucked me in. I paused at each sentence just picturing what you where saying. You did a great job with word play |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
now that's inspiring! |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"it was very early morning still when i awoke on a beach of endless tomorrows and those faint glows of daylight got up and walked with me, to the sea" Beautiful write Lee J. Love this verse!! JL Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed: |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Oh LeeJ, JL showcased my favorite part...and you are just an amazing woman to behold. TD |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Very, very good writing, Lee. Hugs, Ethel |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ You know your poems always take my breath away and I took a chance to read this because with this cough I have I don't have much breath left.  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Lee, without a doubt, this is my favourite of all of your poems that I have had the priviledge of reading! Outstanding piece of writing! Thank you so much for sharing a part of your journey with your avid readers ~ and fans!  You wrote of the integration of both aspects of you, with such grace, understanding, eloquence, ~ and acceptance. I love both of you, my dear friend! Now you are at one with yourself ~ and with God!  God's Loving Light, Linda xo |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
What a pleasure to read this on my return although it has rendered me somewhat speechless. Your insight is astounding and expression equally so. LeeJ - you're still amazing! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
LeeJ You are so word glorious...I can almost see this colorful globe inside you where they fall from. "how many ways can one benefit from tragedy?" Not sure, but tis true. Hugging you! |
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