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Open Poetry #40

Wake Me Up

howardtsu
Senior Member

since 2006-01-29

Posts 678

0 posted 2007-01-06 02:44 PM

         i never meant to become your daydream on Mulberry Street

i thought for sure we could share some cookies n' cream so sweet

but instead  i melted our desert with an irrisistable Heat

that came straight from Miami in my attempt to repeat

a right that went wrong when i discovered your beat

                you played it so well that i still can't delete

the impression you made on my heart now i'll always see your feet

                  walking away with him singing songs

that left up to my imagination lead me to believe that you two

                                  belong together

                                                                            love,

                                                                            howard

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2007-01-06 04:47 PM

Perhaps...James

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

2 posted 2007-01-06 09:58 PM

Love this, Howard!
Hugs,
Ethel

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

3 posted 2007-01-06 10:32 PM

and...maybe
not

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

4 posted 2007-01-06 11:26 PM

Howard... enjoyed this!
RDB

howardtsu
Senior Member

since 2006-01-29

Posts 678

5 posted 2007-01-07 02:07 PM

it's been a while since i've posted here

good to hear from you guys

LukeatNFFC
Junior Member

since 2003-07-09

Posts 42
Nottingham, England

6 posted 2007-01-11 12:34 PM

What's with all the one-word responses around here? Too cryptic for me to understand even the gist of...

Anyways, nice poem, as most are on here. Lacked a bit of rhythm for my liking, though maybe that's my eyes or brain.

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