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moment in time |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
where elm meets oak two lovers came with hearts entwined as minstrels sing sculpting love-art on windows dim moon lit from darkened day’s delight lanterns glowing, hearts afire village rests, hearts aspire as day lights shadows pass from flame to ash and nighttime shades do spring he turns to her, she studies him and hand in hand they stroll into the night and loose their souls from routine’s mire and sear their souls in passion’s fire as hand in hand they clasp that self-same moment in time |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you are really fantastic at this rhyme scheme I'm in awe |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
thank you dixie, but I must admit that you and ThisDiamond are responsible for my use of it. I was inspired by her desire to see more of it, and by your calling attention to it. I used it three times now, so I suppose that I could call it a trilogy (smiles), and leave it behind for now... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
That wondrous moment in time had me all aglow as I savoured the romantic warmth of this beautifully scribes poem of love. To love and being loved in return!  Linda  |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Steaven, I don't think you will ever leave this behind...it will blend into all your perfect meter in the future. You have lovely vision. TD |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
well I really hope to see you using it more but just in case you don't...I'm putting these in my personal library here I truly admire the form and might have a hand at it once myself, sooner or later |
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