Open Poetry #40 |
. . . Sharing this memory for eternity |
Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
whispering softly you have sheathed my love within our souls intertwined ~*~ rain sings on window sweet slow lullaby of love matching gentle pace ~*~ synchronous breathing senses rushing to flood stage unstoppable surge ~*~ this new memory sharing for eternity each time our eyes meet Inspired by: /pip/Forum103/HTML/000229.html Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
beautifully done, and yes, she is such an inspiration.... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very romantic! |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
just breathe...... ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
B E A U T I F U L ! In the midst of winter, |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Doctor Love how beautifully you have woven your words into my memories magnificent! romantic too... |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
yes... *sigh* and the rain, oh yes, gotta love that.... beautiful! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Interloper...A lovely sharing! |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Interloper darling man, you slip softly into the corners of my mind and soul stirring sweet memories of delicious thoughts. I have just spent the last four days on campus darling man, and while there I cannot access my mail or get online using my laptop. I have tried but my laptop doesn’t use the chipset that the wireless network is set to. Therefore I have to struggle along using the old method of reading books and studying in the library. A beautiful library it is too, but it doesn’t allow access to PiP’s. Mainly because my computer account with the Uni is one of the associate ones and therefore limited. So I can only get on line to read these pages of pleasure when I am at home. Beautiful writing as always, you know you have such a superb lightness of touch when it comes to writing, this is worth coming home for as always Mushy x x x x x x x Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Interloper, After reading the words of your inspiration, I can easily see why you were inspired to write. Her words really touched me, as well. Marvelous writing and a lovely response to a wonderful poet. miscellanea |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Enchanting response, to this very beautiful rendering. Ah...you both are amazing hearts. TD |
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