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trutodaraiders Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820CA 
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downtown I pass something -- humanity on a stoop Poetry is just the evidence of life. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
wonderful my sweet Bill!!  RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
oooh! I love it! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nice one |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
A fascinating vignette! A moment in time captured through your seeing mind.  Linda P.S. Is this truly a tanka? I thought a tanka was 5,7,5 then closed with 7,7? Whatever the form, you certainly conveyed a great deal with an economy of words!  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Not quite a Tanka but a great thought provoking write. In the midst of winter, |
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trutodaraiders Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820CA |
Wasant for sure what it was close to. lol. Just starting to learn new styles. Thank you for the comments. Glad to stir the imagination |
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