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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
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anything I write whether hogwash or something real drunk talk not rhyming leaving itching on the skin would you understand what I am and how I feel today? Just the need to write something if nothing at all that makes sense to someone with a rational mind and cold heart Forgiveness is grace if one only knows it. But if not, then it's anger. Or self-pity if I ever needed you at all. |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
Forgiveness is grace if one only knows it. But if not, then it's anger. Or self-pity if I ever needed you at all. I like these lines imparticular...makes me think...as I have had alot of anger of late. ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you and me both Julie but we'll get through |
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trutodaraiders Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820CA |
Passing you do great at freestyle and structured poetry. I like these lines anything I write whether hogwash or something real drunk talk not rhyming leaving itching on the skin |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Forgiveness is grace if one only knows it. But if not, then it's anger. oh my Dixie girl... those words are awesome! RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"Forgiveness is grace if one only knows it." very profound Dixie and grace is all... |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
such a cathartic write coupled with such wisdom...as always, enjoyed |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Anything you write is emotional and I for one understand Hope |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
enjoyed this a lot |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Write on  |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
feeling you here Dixie....hugs. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Dixie Everyone has picked the forgiveness line ... I would too.  |
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