Open Poetry #40 |
You Drive Me |
Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
Tap and jangle Hand to hip A rhythm A feel like something Musical A flavored taste of something mystical You drive me round the bend Hold me off the road Hold me down wearing thin Wearing out typical and Clever enough I suppose Handy enough never To lasso that though until I saw you pass In a mist a dream a dazzling specter Wonderful Blissfully wonderful |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
to quote you, this was truly 'musical', 'mystical' and 'wonderful' |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
ah blissfully wonderful indeed! RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
outstanding |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
A whirlwind of smiles, this is. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Excellent write! Write on! Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
felt like you were grinning from ear to ear...well, I was...enjoyed |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
And blissfully wonderful is your poem. ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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Notelady Junior Member
since 2007-02-09
Posts 11the deep deep south |
made me grin something wicked both times I read it! bravo! |
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