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JeffD Junior Member
since 2007-02-06
Posts 28CT |
Hows it going. This is my first post on the sight so I figured I would post this with it. I hope everyone likes it. Sight All the days of my life, I can hear you cry. How does the rest of the world see you, except me? What is wrong with you and me since we cannot see each other? The only time I see you is in my dreams when I hear you screaming. The darkness keeps you from seeing. But since I cannot see, my ears have tuned to hear you. The only way to see you is through your beautiful voice. Everyday in my dreams I see your eyes weeping through the darkness. I cannot understand how you can smile as you weep. But this makes me grasp for you more. I do not know what this means as my dreams often deceive. But I cherish you whenever you speak to me. The darkness keeps you from seeing. But since I cannot see, my ears have tuned to hear you. The only way to see you is through that wretched voice. I have learned that sight is not what you see, since your eyes often deceive. But when she talks to me she becomes my beauty queen. All I want is to see you as everyone else does. Whenever I hear you I cry, because for that beautiful moment I think that we are actually meant for each other. But this causes the mountains in my mind to fall and scream. This horrid darkness is what keeps you from seeing. And since I cannot see you my ears have turned your voice in to a person. All I want is to get your voice out of my mind. Jeff D. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Hi Jeff! Welcome to Passions! I know you will enjoy it here And I look forward to seeing more of your writing. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ In the midst of winter, |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Hello Jeff... welcome to our blue pages... I know you will love it here... thank you for posting, I really enjoyed your first offering and look forward to reading more of you  RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions, Jeff. Please, check your Email for a Very Special Greeting! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
welcome aboard! |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Welcome to Pip Jeff. I enjoyed your first post. Hope to read more. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Welcome to the blue pages. You will like it here |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JeffD~ WELCOME to the friendliest poetic circle you will find on the Internet~ We will enjoy coming to know you through your sharing of words~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Hello and welcome my oh my what a beautiful write, and loved the ending... nice entrance, I think your going to have lots of fun here... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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JeffD Junior Member
since 2007-02-06
Posts 28CT |
Thanks everyone. |
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xrayzerase Junior Member
since 2007-02-07
Posts 10usa |
jeff i joined (nancy told me about this forum) and read your words earlier. i am so--just--you write beautifully. i look forward to reading much more from you, nancy, and others as i go through much of the work here. ~andrea |
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