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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2007-02-04 10:19 AM



Some days my mind plays tricks on me,
the past becomes the present.
I smile, then wake to find it was
a dream of life when pleasant.

When worry was a shared expense,
when loving eased the pain,
when everything was everything,
and nothing needed gain.

Those days I wish, were well behind,
so life in meaning seems
to bring alive the everything
in real instead of dreams.

I press my thoughts to hold them in,
but feelings trickle through.
This winter's cold has seeped inside
exposed to wishes new.

Some days my mind plays tricks on me,
as this is one of those,
I'll close my eyes remembering
the beauty of one rose.

M




"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2007-02-04 11:04 AM


Maureen,
Day by day in every way you get better and better.

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
2 posted 2007-02-04 03:38 PM


Thank you Sy, wish I could agree, but it's nice to  "hear" you say that

M

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
3 posted 2007-02-04 09:32 PM


I press my thoughts to hold them in,
but feelings trickle through.
This winter's cold has seeped inside
exposed to wishes new.

~*~

I can understand the cold...
but I'm waiting for my baby.  






Enchantress
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Canada eh.
4 posted 2007-02-04 10:06 PM


"Some days my mind plays tricks on me,
as this is one of those,
I'll close my eyes remembering
the beauty of one rose."

Lovely this...
Lovely you!

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

The Lady
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The Southwest
5 posted 2007-02-04 11:28 PM



"when everything was everything,
and nothing needed gain."

superb M

SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown
6 posted 2007-02-04 11:54 PM


Absolutely beautiful!
passing shadows
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displaced
7 posted 2007-02-05 03:31 AM


*understanding sigh*
Interloper
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Deep in the heart
8 posted 2007-02-05 11:10 AM


You stil see magic in a rose

Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

LeeJ
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9 posted 2007-02-05 11:16 AM


I press my thoughts to hold them in,
but feelings trickle through.
This winter's cold has seeped inside
exposed to wishes new.


there are roses in our lives that surely do leave a vision of their loveliness within us forever...

Marge Tindal
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Florida's Foreverly Shores
10 posted 2007-02-05 02:19 PM


MzBliss~

'When worry was a shared expense'

Oh yes~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email -             noles1@totcon.com

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