Open Poetry #40 |
Just One Rose |
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Some days my mind plays tricks on me, the past becomes the present. I smile, then wake to find it was a dream of life when pleasant. When worry was a shared expense, when loving eased the pain, when everything was everything, and nothing needed gain. Those days I wish, were well behind, so life in meaning seems to bring alive the everything in real instead of dreams. I press my thoughts to hold them in, but feelings trickle through. This winter's cold has seeped inside exposed to wishes new. Some days my mind plays tricks on me, as this is one of those, I'll close my eyes remembering the beauty of one rose. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." (Will Moss) |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Maureen, Day by day in every way you get better and better. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you Sy, wish I could agree, but it's nice to "hear" you say that M |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I press my thoughts to hold them in, but feelings trickle through. This winter's cold has seeped inside exposed to wishes new. ~*~ I can understand the cold... but I'm waiting for my baby. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"Some days my mind plays tricks on me, as this is one of those, I'll close my eyes remembering the beauty of one rose." Lovely this... Lovely you! In the midst of winter, |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"when everything was everything, and nothing needed gain." superb M |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Absolutely beautiful! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
*understanding sigh* |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
You stil see magic in a rose Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I press my thoughts to hold them in, but feelings trickle through. This winter's cold has seeped inside exposed to wishes new. there are roses in our lives that surely do leave a vision of their loveliness within us forever... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MzBliss~ 'When worry was a shared expense' Oh yes~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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