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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2007-02-03 06:54 PM


Suzie's Still Around


Today, even though
Suzie's far away,
everytime my heart pounds
she's still around,
still around.

Today, though we're apart,
she's all over
inside my heart,
She's still around,
everytime my heart pounds
Suzie's still around.


JamesLee
03February
2007

Wrote after reading
"If Suzie's Not Around"
Open 33
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passing shadows
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1 posted 2007-02-03 10:01 PM

time passes...makes us more sure of what is real
JamesMichael
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2 posted 2007-02-05 08:58 PM

Thank you for the nice response passing shadows...James
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