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CastleGuard Senior Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 760Alberta, Canada |
an abandoned house - spiderwebs cling to rafters as threads of sorrow CG |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I closed my eyes and saw this powerful imagery here |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
oh yes CG! |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
Great image. maybe change "as" to "the" I really like this haiku! I hate haikus... restriction of line length drives me up the wall, hah! Nice work. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Very descriptive. |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
The castle guard is NOT suppossed to abandon his castle....but after reading you get a pardon!!  ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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TSC Junior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 31Canada |
I don't typically like haiku's, but I really like this one. To make something emotionally signifigant in such a short space - skillfull. |
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