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It Came on Wing
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It Came on Wing |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California 
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 It Came on Wing It came on wing of air soft-tuned waif of thought loomed by mother’s willing knot and minutes daring sky dark tossed Saying now is in between of see a place of dream and slanted time and if you open mind of eye past goodbye to winged caprice where peace holds eager at arms length you’ll see around the curve of grace the lovely of a missing face I know this thought is fulsome want and bids to see past seem of real to peel the skin between the strands such faith is hard sometimes to feel I’ve seen this bless of rip in fabric all stitched down with stretch elastic to leave the room of bright lit tone to find a song no not alone but filled with fabric cinched not severed between the clouds I’ve seen forever ---- RR and RP with love always for Michelle and thoughts of Sissie Sunshine. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
for some reason, I knew before I opened this  beautiful you |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
to find a song no not alone but filled with fabric cinched not severed between the clouds I’ve seen forever ~*~ And this is why I do. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Beautiful pic and write, too  Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
it came on wing of your beautiful, poetic sensibilities H, Robert |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie A lovely write, I enjoyed the read. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Isn't that strange, I thought the title was It Came On Wind? I thought before I read it too that it was about or for Michelle, and that you had been up to "your" mountain and felt her. Beautiful write Martie, beautiful. |
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ivordavies Senior Member
since 2007-01-10
Posts 739Chester, England |
I found this interesting and in a style I had not encountered until joining this site. Although I did not know the subject of your poetry, I feel that it floats in a place I know well. Especially relevant due to recent circumstances, thank you for an enlightened write.... Ivor |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MartieSis~ Your wing-fluttered thoughts of Michelle come so gently ... so beautifully, so poignant~ It is a grand time of remembering that little angel~  *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"I’ve seen this bless of rip in fabric all stitched down with stretch elastic to leave the room of bright lit tone to find a song no not alone but filled with fabric cinched not severed between the clouds I’ve seen forever" Martie, I know this to be true and it is a blessing. Absolutely lovely way of putting it! *hugs*....jo |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
as you always do Martie - wonderful sharing of love - Paul |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"It came on wing of air soft-tuned waif of thought loomed by mother’s willing knot" speaks loudly of love for your Michelle and hers for you |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"to leave the room of bright lit tone to find a song no not alone but filled with fabric cinched not severed between the clouds I’ve seen forever" Hugging the beauty of this time remembered. In the midst of winter, |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
I've never gotten over it....from the first time I ever saw any of your writing of Michelle, it's been difficult for me to read. By the time I'm one verse in, I'm fighting tears, and sometimes I barely make it through the poem. Something about the mix of heartbreak and timeless love just gets to me. It's a testament to your poetic skill as much as anything, I suppose, but even that's never stronger than when you're writing of her. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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wredgranny Member
since 2006-11-18
Posts 493Ky. USA |
Siyo Martie my heart joins yours in tears for those lost,but never ever forgotten. The pain my sister never lessens,nor does the love we feel within for that part of our heart has gone on that Long Walk to the Happy Place of loving safety. my prayers are there with you!
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Martie, dear sweet lady, my prayers and blessings are with you....your words fill us somehow, as I'm certain they fill you to...the mind and soul is a spectacular thing, and it is especially nice to read you and know you Luv Lee J> |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
between the clouds I’ve seen forever This I like!!! And have I ever!!! ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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