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Open Poetry #40
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Angel4aKing
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0 posted 2007-01-30 02:25 PM


How you doing girl? he asked
as I lay weeping for his desire
I wasn't ready
and he was spent
both of us curious of the other
not knowing what to expect
what  he couldn't do
had been done so  many times before
and tension building
I found the door open
with out a welcome mat
and in his house I found
my heart bleeding for his feeding

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LeeJ
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1 posted 2007-01-30 05:30 PM

sometimes it happens that way
Angel4aKing
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2 posted 2007-01-30 09:12 PM

and that it did...thanx

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Member Rara Avis
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Deep in the heart
3 posted 2007-01-31 09:55 AM

This is 1dereful!
Well done

Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.
Gentle Spirit
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4 posted 2007-01-31 10:05 AM

oh...ouch...feeling this one Julie...hugs
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