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Open Poetry #40
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MoonShadow
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0 posted 2007-01-08 01:53 PM


             Pantoum Pleasure

Oh let me drink Thine essence with my lips,
inhale Thy lusty fragrance to my soul,
and savoring Thy taste with loving sips,
enjoying divine treasures that unfold.

Inhale Thy lusty fragrance to my soul,
refresh and let my yearning spirit breathe,
enjoying divine treasures that unfold,
and fill my life with pleasures and relief.

Refresh and let my yearning spirit breathe.
Now come and spread your loving light on me,
and fill my life with pleasures and relief,
to feel your loving essence flowing free.

Now come and spread your loving light on me,
trembling with the magic and the power,
to feel your loving essence flowing free,
that set our souls aflame with passion’s fire.

Trembling with the magic and the power,
and savoring Thy taste with loving sips,
that set our souls aflame with passion’s fire,
Oh, let me drink Thine essence with my lips.

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© Copyright 2007 Kenneth W. Myers - All Rights Reserved
Interloper
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Deep in the heart
1 posted 2007-01-08 01:55 PM

Write on

Enchantress
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2 posted 2007-01-08 02:06 PM

A very beautifully penned Pantoum!
Well done indeed Sir!

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.
ThisDiamond
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3 posted 2007-01-08 02:58 PM

Impressive crafting here Moonshadow.  Enjoyed the tempo and the taste of this sweet poem.
trutodaraiders
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4 posted 2007-01-08 03:57 PM

Ken awsome poem here. You have much passion and it shows through your poems. Well done!
JamesMichael
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5 posted 2007-01-08 04:11 PM

Tasty...James
The Lady
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6 posted 2007-01-08 06:26 PM



I too am amazed MoonShadow
your talent seems endless

oh this is so lovely!
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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7 posted 2007-01-09 06:00 AM

mmmm.... simply awesome write!  RDB
LeeJ
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8 posted 2007-01-09 06:24 AM

Beautiful
passing shadows
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displaced
9 posted 2007-01-09 07:22 AM

whew! I like it!
MoonShadow
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10 posted 2007-01-09 11:49 AM

  Interloper, James, LeaJ, Tru... Thank you for the read and your kind response.

  Nancy... Milady with style, I am glad you liked this style.

  TDiamond... Thank you for your kind comment.

  TLady... Your glowing acceptance overwhelms me with warmth as I write to please.

  Dixie... Whew! You said a mouthful, Milady. (Wink)

         MoonShadow
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