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LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

0 posted 2007-01-08 07:39 AM

voice of sunrise over sea

it was jubilant…
almost triumphant music
waves
undulating on
rocks somewhere
half dreamily
like glockenspiels
of crystalline notes
translucent glass prisms
dancing hues of colors
moving
rhythmically
caressing intently wistfulness
feeling moonlight strobes
fragments of strange
sensations
strew
like dense thickets
eager, little mathematical
exactness, leaping portions
of life
& ancient mercenaries
hallucinating thought engravers
to balance hands of age
man’s worn rocks
hollowing smoothly
earnestly
like time’s human part
expressing an inhuman fusing
of opposites
embracing heart
of promise
dripping down on me
drowning vapours
that were not
simply coincidence

coinciding effects with other
manifestations of faint glows
commanding a gateway entrance
shining full radiance
upon ruins & sea
an outer courtyard
sapping will
to move
filled with ecstasy
swelling visions that held my
fixed eyelids

deepest tremors of love
inner visions
filled & surrounded
core of being
body pulsed
serene horizons
bursting sound...then...
utter silence

rush of life
& faintest hope
finds belief
silvery rims
of great azure blue seas
shining pillars
of light
rising up & down
symmetry
from a sapphire depth
playing out life’s aura
sparkling phosphorescence
shifting glows
their splendid
atoms
embracing some
poised strength
forming what was me, & will

sending out questing swirls
& tendrils of things to come
strengthened by them
gaining substance
swirls of amber mists
dance sweetness
to the icy soul of despair

holding assumed thoughts
of another
sphere, little tiny notes
of human semblance
it was
the voice of soul
beaming composition
sensitive murmurings
of some
consciouness sweeping
realization’s frantic hands
verifying
impersonations of
heaven, perhaps some
other half of me
or some supernatural
being? I dunno?

realizing masses
of stonework
a human craving for
something more powerful
more infinate
then self
superstition seals my lips
as another greater part passes
by, straining anxiety
of every moment
exsists beyond
religious impulse
beyond man’s
capacity to perceive
a greater engineer
of knowledge
swaying slowly like the
rhythmic lift
& fall of gentle waves
at sea...

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2007-01-08 07:59 AM

LeeJ
You rock an endless lullaby. Lovely

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

2 posted 2007-01-08 12:21 PM

So real I got motion sickness

Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2007-01-08 01:10 PM

wow

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

4 posted 2007-01-08 02:05 PM

"beyond man’s
capacity to perceive
a greater engineer
of knowledge
swaying slowly like the
rhythmic lift
& fall of gentle waves
at sea..."

Hummmm....
You have a way with words.
A beautiful way.

Beautiful close.

JL

Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed:
blessed are they that have not seen, and yet have believed.
~Jesus Christ

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2007-01-08 02:14 PM

Oh my WOW!!!
Lee this is fantastic!
I especially loved the way this rolled off my tongue,
"like glockenspiels
of crystalline notes
translucent glass prisms
dancing hues of colors
moving
rhythmically"

Good stuff lady~

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

6 posted 2007-01-08 04:57 PM

and this is my sweet spot...

"sending out questing swirls
& tendrils of things to come"

love it LeeJ

trutodaraiders
Senior Member

since 2006-12-02

Posts 820
CA

7 posted 2007-01-08 05:29 PM

Holy smoke~~ Nicely penned. I think I learned a few new words of this poem as wel (: ~Bill

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

8 posted 2007-01-09 01:20 AM

Wonderful visions and emotional flow amongst the morming glow

Hope

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

9 posted 2007-01-09 04:36 AM

LeeJ.... simply awesome writing !! RDB

Beatrice Boyle
Member

since 2006-12-06

Posts 438

10 posted 2007-01-09 04:55 AM

LeeJ...this was fantastic...overwhemlming...the alliteration was superb!

Bea

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

11 posted 2007-01-09 10:28 AM

Lee, I experienced the "rush of life" in your richly descriptive and vitalizing writing!

Your pen speaks with a compelling "voice"!

Loveya!
Linda

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