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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Reflections Touch the water of reflection It drifts into eternity Break the smooth of its connection It circles to infinity You cannot hold onto a dream It’s made of vapors mist undone And though it has desires gleam It disappears in morning’s sun Take the night for what its worth The treasures that the mind will wring Those fancy phantoms of the earth The knights and queens that love will bring So cast your net upon the sea And reap the bounty that you get Play the mist that brews the tea And never weigh it as a debt It is a gift of night time order Unless, unless you touch the water |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
So cast your net upon the sea And reap the bounty that you get Play the mist that brews the tea And never weigh it as a debt you've been sippin coffee with the ocean again, haven't you? seems like we're on the same wavelength this morn.... Morning Sy, Happy Monday |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Seymour, this is so beautiful. As always! I do alot of reflecting. As for dreams, I have hung onto quite a few. Maybe it is time for me to let go of some of those dreams. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ It seems that way. Thank you for the read And have a happy. SmartChick All you have to do is touch the water.  |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Well done  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Interloper Have you touched the water lately? Thank you |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"Touch the water of reflection It drifts into eternity Break the smooth of its connection It circles to infinity" As soft and gentle as a whisper ...or a lover's sigh. Beautiful write dear Sy.  &  , NancyIn the midst of winter, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nancy, I know you have looked into the water. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"Unless, unless you touch the water" so intriguing this last line I have touched the water Sir Sy and it's warm thank you for this makes me smile big |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lady You caught what I liked the most. Unless, unless you touch the water. Thank you |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Seymour, enjoyed the read PoetFriend...*~coco~* |
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Beatrice Boyle Member
since 2006-12-06
Posts 438 |
Well Sir Sy...you have outdone yourself with this one. Too many of us are afraid to touch the water, afraid that our dreams will disappear. Well done my friend.  Bea |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
just lovely Sir Sy! RDB |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
CocoBaci Appreciate the read, thank you. Bea, Thank you for understanding. Roniece Sir sy thanks you. |
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trutodaraiders Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820CA |
Very well done. Always enjoy reading you in the morning. Kudos! ~Bill |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good morning, Mr. T.! I read your poem so many times, that I realized that it must surely be another  You write magic, Sir Sorcerer!  Methinks thy pen be a wand! EA |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Wonderfully written Sy!!! This reflects well on you. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Bill, I appreciate your comment, thank you. Earth Angel, Your comments are like your poetry. I LOVE IT. scorpio If it's a reflection in water, don't touch it. LOL |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
so many I haven't read and missed~~ so inspiring M |
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