Open Poetry #40 |
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...Another Winter Night.... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. ![]() |
. What will you do when shortened days and night's darkness hide the best hours? What would you do without a hearth to sit and watch dancing flames? Beyond the window the world - wrapped in virgin whiteness life goes on Above the falling snow a silver sliver of a quarter moon sails dreamily through star-decked skies the night is alive - Children's voices erupt in squeals of joy the battle is on - snowballs fly and victims fall leaving their angel imprints upon another winter night. . |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
EnchantedLady~ It's delightful and I LOVE the format~ But ... I'm glad it's your snowball and not mine !! Brrr ... watching a presentation right now about what that lovely snowfall does to our environment~ I just love watching kids TV ! Landy and I are snuggled up under our blankie on this chilly Florida afternoon~ *Huglets* ![]() ~*Marge and little Miss Landry Leigh*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
Beautiful view to look and see between the snow flakes... ah... between the lines. MoonShadow . |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
whew, it's going to be cold cold cold here in PA tonight and tomorrow...don't think I'll be going outside to play...but, I will remember this, tonight, with a smile.... thanks for sharing this lovely lady |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Ah no snow here tonight, but just alot of cold. Love the images in this Nancy. Hugs you... |
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Nightshade![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Beautiful Teed. hugs & miss ya! Chris ![]() |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
I, too, am ready for the winter to be over. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"Above the falling snow a silver sliver of a quarter moon sails dreamily through star-decked skies the night is alive -" ![]() So nice! A beauty! JL ![]() Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed: |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, Nancy, this poem has such a lovely feel to it. I love winter! (Actually, I love all four seasons!) You illustrate perfectly, the joys of winter in our neck of the woods! A 'hearth'-warming write, Enchanting One! Giving you an extra warm hug, Linda |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
your enchantment makes me long for snow in the desert... lovely work |
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Waterfall27 Member
since 2005-06-24
Posts 98Ontario , Canada |
Beautiful |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Tinker this is a beautiful poem. You've captured all the elements of a wonderful winter scene. Awesome!! believe in what your heart feels... |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Much enjoyed this Nancy Lee! *hugs* |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
ah...this makes me remember years ago when we had snow in FL and we had snowballs fights beautiful write |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
~Thank you all so much for your wonderful replies~ In the midst of winter, |
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trutodaraiders Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820CA |
Lovely..At times I wish I didnt move away from the snow. Poem brought back some fond childhood memories |
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sewasham Senior Member
since 2006-09-11
Posts 714Oklahoma, USA |
Very lovely words that created some beautiful images. Take care and Have fun. Steve |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
though I don't see much of it now, these lines "Above the falling snow a silver sliver of a quarter moon sails dreamily through star-decked skies the night is alive -" helped me hearken back to days of yore, simple days of childhood when we lived through seasons of snow...loved it then...love it now through your beautiful words... |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MyFriend~ Now ... look what that old snowfall has done ... you get to feeling all better, you hear me ? Friends reading this ... she's got darn-near pneumonia ... that's what !!! Nance ... tea and rest~ *Huglets* ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
My Lady... the real question is what would I do without your "Kinkadesque" word-imagery? Thank you for a very colorful visual. I hope that hearth remains warm for a long time. Good to read you again. ![]() You CAN make a difference, but first you should learn how: http://educate-yourself.org/intro.shtml |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
great poetry Nancy - loved the images and feelings I got with this - Paul |
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