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ivordavies Senior Member
since 2007-01-10
Posts 739Chester, England 
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I won't claim they are all haiku, but just a little of my perspective on the shorter poetry ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Post Mortem Going through the veil - Once life’s journey is a tale Did your faith prevail ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Empty Noise dry branches snapping - summer glory now faded still tries to impress ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Eternity Beckons body discarded spirit struggling upwards - too late to grow wings ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Destiny deep thunder rumbling silence envelopes the land - destiny draws near ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Astral Womb astral absorption blends life continually - soul's evolution ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Free Spirit thundering of hoofs freedom’s stampede of delight - spirit unbroken ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Aching aching deep within reaching out beyond the veil never forgotten Ivor G Davies The moment created this second, is a moment that's going to last. It lives the full spectrum of time, the future, the present and past. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
oh my Ivor... you are truly talented and a wonderful poet! enjoyed... RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed reading these...James |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Ivor, enjoyed each of these my friend, thank you so much for sharing. Rick |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
Marvelous sir. enjoyed |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Honestly, I cannot pick a favourite! Each one was impressive and enjoyed. You certainly were able to accomplish a great deal with an economy of words!!! EXCELLENT work, Divine Poet!  I'm still reeling from the gamut of emotions I just experienced! lol Namaste Linda  |
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ivordavies Senior Member
since 2007-01-10
Posts 739Chester, England |
Well thank you all for your most welcome support, in what I find the most difficult of writes. Haiku does not come easy to me, but it is hard to say why. Most of my poetry floats off my pen and all I have to do is correct it gramatically and alter it a bit to suit me a little better than it first appeared. Unfortunately Haiku does not, some nagging feeling says I have something to write, hours later after looking at the blank page I finally get something, interpretation from the thought to words is left to me and not my muse! So you can see why I appreciate your support, this is not my natural medium and sometimes I need patting on the head! Thanks again, Ivor |
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Fairplay Member
since 2007-01-15
Posts 222England |
Short Reply..... Short of shorts Short shorts Sort of shorts ??? |
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