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ivordavies
Senior Member

since 2007-01-10

Posts 739
Chester, England

0 posted 2007-07-14 03:00 AM

Gods and Sinners

There is no God there's only man
to make this world a place that can
ignore the words of those that Cry
"He's coming back"... Just let him try!

For all the prophets, sons of God,
religions cause the pathway trod
by mankind when he goes to war
will someone tell me what it's for?

Some may object to what I say
but isn't there a better way,
for how in hell can heaven succeed
when Gods, not sinners plant the seed!

Ivor G Davies

The moment created this second, is a moment that's going to last.
It lives the full spectrum of time, the future, the present and past.

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2007-07-14 03:13 AM

Three simple quatrains--when those speak of God and Sinner, ought to say enough:

a certain simple complexity, and loved the last line--

thanks Ivor, for the good company tonight.

Much enjoyed.

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

2 posted 2007-07-14 03:16 AM

yes, I agree with Serenity .. thanks Ivor, your words were beautifully expressed! (as always!) I also think the critque you gave RGK's post was good.. RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

ivordavies
Senior Member

since 2007-01-10

Posts 739
Chester, England

3 posted 2007-07-14 03:18 AM

It's actually morning here, and I loved your post. I nearly wrote a long response saying all it meant to me, but you did it superbly without me pouring out my understanding...

Ivor

ivordavies
Senior Member

since 2007-01-10

Posts 739
Chester, England

4 posted 2007-07-14 03:21 AM

RDB

This one was actually hot off the pen, as you probably gathered if you followed my editing!

Thank you both again for your comments.

Ivor

Rick
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia

5 posted 2007-07-14 06:07 AM

Great writing here Ivor, flows very nicely and makes one question much. Good morning, have a wonderful day my friend.

Rick

Klassy Lassy
Member Elite

since 2005-06-28

Posts 2187
Oregon

6 posted 2007-07-14 08:22 AM

Interesting work upon this page
is clever rant, in subtle rage,
at what the world thinks we should
be doing in the name of good.

Time and matter come to naught
in havoc wraught of mortal thought.

~ KL

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