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A Time of Broken Desires
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A Time of Broken Desires |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A Time of Broken Desires Second best becomes first best as first best is placed to rest, but hopes and dreams and desires are not so easily laid aside within a lovers heart. Still it is a process that I am going through and one that every one must go through when the one they desire walks away, leaving them with nothing but a time of broken desires to grace their days. JamesLee 13July 2007 Wrote this after reading Neeraja's response to one of my writes. |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. “Still it is a process that I am going through and one that every one must go through when the one they desire walks away, leaving them with nothing but a time of broken desires to grace their days.” Maybe you’ll become a Buddha . |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thanks Huan for responding... I've heard storys of some women following a broken heart wanting to become Nuns... I appreciate some of the thoughts of the Dali Lama...but as for me following Buddha...a good thought but not...James |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
how sad. How sad!!!! in a beautiful poem sigh... broken desire is sort of torture. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
James... how sad... I love how you express your feelings here... be well RDB  Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Drauntz and Roniece for the nice responses...James |
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