Emotional Detachment of God (rp)

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Open Poetry #40

Emotional Detachment of God (rp)

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

0 posted 2007-07-14 02:04 AM

He squashed a bug with His big toe
because it had no place to go--
the power of it made Him laugh:
"That..is that." and aftermath
attracted ants, who didn't know
that God was watching them.

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

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Realms of Light

1 posted 2007-07-14 02:30 AM

Hmmm, that's a curious take on the Big Guy! lol

btw ~ I'm an ant! Ooops! Wrong kind. ~ I'm an AUNT

Now I best get some shut-eye. Nighty Nite

Linda

ivordavies
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since 2007-01-10

Posts 739
Chester, England

2 posted 2007-07-14 02:46 AM

Loved this, it wraps up so many of my beliefs into one subtle verse!

Ivor

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

3 posted 2007-07-14 03:17 AM

Serenity... I love this! RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

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West Coast

4 posted 2007-07-14 07:16 AM

ms serene, enjoyed your stature in this

Klassy Lassy
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since 2005-06-28

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Oregon

5 posted 2007-07-14 09:41 AM

I feel that way when the sugar ants invade my kitchen, but not nearly so detached...

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

6 posted 2007-07-16 08:46 AM

I never thought I'd feel empathy for a bug... but I've heard that same laughter... for much the same reasons. *S*

Well done, creative one. *S*

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