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Tomer
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since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168
Michigan

0 posted 2007-07-13 06:54 PM


Sad like
A drip of wine,
Bending with its bloody drop,
Pirouetting with
His loosely fit tie.

A winter stage,
Curled above
His brown, laced boots,
Sat his black, cashmere scarf.

The signs of green
That watched each corner,
Lay it’s white eyes upon
His thick, raspy, skin.

His knuckles seamed together,
With freckles of hair
That spun its roots
Into the frosty air
That pasted the window stores.

Dicing his way
Through each corner,
He spotted the wooden bench
He grew ever so fond of.

Like a woven quilt,
Stitched with hands of silk,
He sat with his back
To the peoples stares,

As he stray
The air with blue hues,
His vision caught fire
Among the icy loom.

[This message has been edited by Tomer (07-13-2007 07:27 PM).]

© Copyright 2007 Tomer Fried - All Rights Reserved
Drauntz
Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905
Los Angeles California
1 posted 2007-07-14 01:34 PM


oh, you wrote fine poem. beautiful.

enjoyed

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
2 posted 2007-11-05 03:59 PM


Fine poem indeed

ARCTIC WIND

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