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Lily and the Jack of Hearts #2 |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest 
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Lily was a princess, she was fair-skinned and as precious as a child, She did whatever she had to do, she had that certain flash every time she smiled. ~ Bob Dylan her hands itched for the feel of his arrogance surely it bore out the promise of his stance he saw her turned away the princess knew her way around yet she could not smile this time he was forever tall with expensive brown eyes she knew she would pay the price she folded her wings pitched her voice in the key of desire laid her whole hand on the table the Jack heard her knew she was already his he had only to stir the air |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
beautiful. again. so fine a imagination. enjoyed. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you Drauntz for your kind reply |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Ah, Kate, this is so good. he was forever tall with expensive brown eyes she knew she would pay the price How did she get those eyes? I was sure that I had bought them a long time ago. And he said that they were one of a kind! Hugs, A |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
ahhh Alison my friend they all have expensive eyes or say they do you made me smile BIG thank you... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"she folded her wings pitched her voice in the key of desire" ~ Oh! Lady Kate! You've found me out! lol  "he was forever tall with expensive brown eyes she knew she would pay the price" ~ Some men are worth any price!  Love your poetry, Lady! LA  |
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Dominique-Simone Senior Member
since 2005-11-12
Posts 643 |
her hands itched for the feel of his arrogance surely it bore out the promise of his stance he saw her turned away Brilliant... |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Linda Angel I see even angels are willing to give all for love thank you  thank you Page! you know how I appreciate you  |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Lady Kate!! this is awesome!  RDBBe kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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divine chaos Senior Member
since 2006-07-09
Posts 617dancing 'neath the moon |
her hands itched for the feel of his arrogance Lady Kate, my oh my do I know that 'itch' ~sigh~ I love this, and I've missed reading you while I've been away from the blue ~Sheli |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you Roniece my friend for your kind reply ah Sheli that itch always demands scratching, yes? thank you |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
"he was forever tall with expensive brown eyes she knew she would pay the price" i know him yes i do believe i dated him.... |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you Helen I am positive you dated him and lived to tell the story |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
An instalment that titilates the appetite with imagery that makes one yearn for more... Your mastery is exemplified. Perhaps, at least, a Novella... Yes? MoonShadow . |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you gentle MoonShadow this is a love story beyond compare it would take eternity to write it |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LadyKate~ Ahhhhhhh, ... 'he was forever tall' ... and, "a love story beyond compare" ? Yes ... I can see that~  Share the "eternity" ? *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you so much Marge |
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