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Lily and the Jack of Hearts # 1
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Lily and the Jack of Hearts # 1 |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest 
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He was standin' in the doorway lookin' like the Jack of all Hearts. ~ Bob Dylan he shot his arms from black wool turned handsomely to the side square brown fingertips touched each womanheart in the room startled hands dropped every card ever held red queens fell to the floor slight tens turned corners up delicate fingers whimpered oh he breathed once drew in womanair green felt smoothed itself watching knowing what was to come piano tinkle trickled stopped silence hung a shadow bold and daring leaned into the room a dark longing it was a shadow nothing more |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
beautiful poem. Lovely story. magic imagination. An elegant lady tiptoes her tune. waiting for the #2 |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you so much Drauntz #2 is waiting in the wings hoping |
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Dominique-Simone Senior Member
since 2005-11-12
Posts 643 |
imagine that... you know i love this |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you Page I hope you love the rest... |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
Dillon, himself, could not have painted a more profound image. You transport us there and hold us spell bound for more. Does the novel begin here..yes? MoonShadow . |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
gentle MoonShadow this is where the true story began, yes... and still it lingers thank you |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
W O N D E R F U L!!! Lady Kate I love this! RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
beautiful ARCTIC WIND |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you Roniece, my friend Arctic Wind, thank you very much |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LadyKate~ I'm so glad this one came around again ... I seem to have missed it the first go-round~ Lovely thoughts you share~ I'm going to look for #2 ! *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you Poetess! |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
The lady on my newest poem, some people have asked you some questions just to warn you! but in any case, love this poem ARCTIC WIND |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you Artic Wind |
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