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Fork and Pork
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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FORK AND PORK The devil often prods his fork In my butt like a piece of pork To watch my action of display For him to go or him to stay He is illusions master mind There’s nothing he can’t work or find But payment is his evil goal For just a snip of your soul There is no end to shape or size But beware you are the prize His mirror shows forever’s time But surely is a pit of lime He offers you a freedoms reign But freedom comes to naught but pain And long as time is in the mix You know the end a bag of tricks So live the life you’re meant to live And give the most that you can give |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
"So live the life you’re meant to live And give the most that you can give" thank you lovie  And when they call me crazy (again) I will tell them that I have permission from Seymour Tabin! (They won't know what the heck I'm talking about--but...shrug?) WE know.  It's so good to see more Tabin! *squeeze you tight* |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Dealing with the devil never comes without a price...and the game is always rigged in his favor. That fork of his always is a pitch...(think I may have spelled that last word wrong!) ~ Karen |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Well, that devil sure knows how to pull those strings now and again. I like the visual of getting literally prodded, lol.  Your closing as always, is a pure message Sy. Indeed, we need to live our lives and give the most we can. It's a journey and a learning experience. Always a challenge. Lucky are we, when our journey crosses paths and intertwines with someone as wonderful as you.  PS ... I loved Karen's "see more Tabin" line, lol  Best wishes and big hugs, /Kit |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
My dear sir Tabin, I laughed at first then the left of the words frizzed my face. A very beautiful poem but sadly says a true part of life. I love the ending. the courage and love enjoyed as always have a wonderful day, Sir Tabin |
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ivordavies Senior Member
since 2007-01-10
Posts 739Chester, England |
Nearly misread the title, but then that's the devil in me! Ivor |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
So live the life you’re meant to live And give the most that you can give ~~~ that's about all one can do, Sy M |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
ROFLMAO you are too funny Sy great message here but I couldn't help laughing at the first lines this is wonderful!  |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
the best wisdom always comes with a pinch of laughter Sir Sy you have done it again |
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exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada |
Wonderful just wonderful, with just enough sly wit to keep me going today, thank you. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Exactamondo! That's why I aim to keep my butt from being bitten by the Devil! I'm putting my money on the Big Guy upstairs!  Loved the title! I dig your kind of rye, I mean "wry", humour! lol Love you, T-Man! EA |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
 ...Here's to the man who keeps on giving!!.. |
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lacydee Member
since 2007-06-17
Posts 130Indiana |
This was such a good poem. I enjoyed the flow and the meaning. I loved the title too. Great job. Dee as for me and my house, we will serve the Lord. |
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