Open Poetry #40 |
Timescape |
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Timescape Yesterday, the doorbell rang while I was on the phone. The knocking rhythmed more than once, the other side unknown. Phobia controls my will to check and see who is there. Waiting till the car had gone stepped out and found on chair A birthday wish, surprising me a dozen roses red. Their thoughtfulness came just in time to weave a happy thread Into my life that sometimes stalls and fills the worry pail. But in a moment cares were gone and my thoughts began to sail To happier times, those in the past and knowing that for me Tomorrow offers more to come with each new day I see. M ~~Thank You~~ "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." (Will Moss) |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
nice title; pleasant 'slice of life' write! [much enjoyed!] Applause!! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you Bruce. Sometimes it's the little things in life that make you forget the bigger problems~~ M |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
lovely heart-thoughts delivered to you eh...! awesome great write to share the moment with us! hugs, g "...Never regret anything that made you smile..." |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice, very nice...James |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
beautiful, your heart of poetry, the roses and this moment you've shared with us... |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Awwww, what a beautiful surprise! |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion |
always good to get a nice surprise I am the little cracked mirror |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Yes, it was a wonderful surprise I almost missed, since I rarely open my door to anyone unless I am expecting someone. Thanks M |
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