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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2007-07-10 02:20 PM

As It Seams

My mind has softened to face each day
with wishful thinking of promised say.
The highs and lows of words in thought
etching the memories words have brought.

A tapestry of ifs that once
had laid the very foundation of
to be or not to be it seamed
to live within a song of love.

My mind has softened to ease each day
to take with it the bridge's sway.
To and fro, left and right
releasing today into tomorrow's flight.

A time for then and a time for now
that join together in silent hold.
What was is still, though the other side
wrapped and treasured to later unfold...

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

passing shadows
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displaced

1 posted 2007-07-10 02:24 PM

this seems peaceful and calming to me

nice work

Marge Tindal

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2007-07-10 02:52 PM

MzBliss~

'To and fro, left and right
releasing today into tomorrow's flight.'

How lovely this~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

3 posted 2007-07-10 03:03 PM

pleasant, interesting ‘write’!

I am especially fond of:

“to live within a song of love”

and, more true than most folks might
realize (based on the actual nature
of ‘time’) is:

“A time for then and a time for now
that join together in silent hold.
What was...is still (!)”

[what we call the ‘past’, ‘present’, and
  ‘future’ actually exist in simultaneity
   on an unmoving ‘timescape’ (dimension)
   like towns on a 'landscape'...
   It is we (all matter) that are undergoing
   continuous change and motion relative
   to the fixed ‘timescape’...like an
   airplane flying over the landscape (which
   is fixed in place relative to the plane's
   motion)]

Applause!!

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

4 posted 2007-07-10 03:05 PM

Thank you Dixie..just in a thoughtful mood today thinking about words and how they can have meaning or not~~~

Thank you, Marge. I have missed reading and being on here but sometimes my mind needs to be elsewhere to survive.

M

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

5 posted 2007-07-10 03:08 PM

Maybe I should have called this "Timescape"...maybe I will write another with that title~~

Thanks, Bruce

suthern

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6 posted 2007-07-10 03:46 PM

I like this very much... especially the first verse! *S* And PS is right... it IS calming. *S* Great write! *S*

SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown

7 posted 2007-07-11 01:01 AM

Beautiful Maureen!

iliana
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USA

8 posted 2007-07-11 03:06 AM

Definitely a touch of grace here, M-Lady. *hugs*....jo

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

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Between the Lines

9 posted 2007-07-11 11:33 AM

Suthern, Sue and Jo...thank you for your kind responses

M

wordwizard
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on the way to next world

10 posted 2007-07-12 04:53 PM

it is a very calming piece...resolute

Snowflake From Hell
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My own little Icey Oblivion

11 posted 2007-07-12 06:36 PM

it is quite calming

I am the little cracked mirror

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

12 posted 2007-07-12 06:51 PM

It's funny, but I didn't write this when feeling calm, actually I was upset but maybe it was what was needed to calm the thoughts.

Thank you, again for sharing your thoughts.
M

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