Open Poetry #40 |
loose horizon |
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
passing the past of the infection of the affection she offered was easy once cured by johnny and his ring songs of gospel coated heal me gods in black and leather caddy lacquer she sent me invitations after to weddings on bollywood afternoons and train rides to bedlam beyond that were endless afterswoons of just the chanting enchantment of cardboard housing beside the rails something about the scars of ra healed more quickly then my cancer and less ugly then her sandaled tattoos or do they call them footprints now _____________ logograph by daark |
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You do layer words well... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Johny and his ring songs are surely sorely missed. You bring back many barefoot memories and happy smiles with this one D. And as always, the between the lines are some of my favorite places to read and be. Hugs big daddy. D~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sun, thanks lady friend _________ ms gs, thank you for taking the time ms |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
You write magic. That's what I think. Alison |
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Dominique-Simone Senior Member
since 2005-11-12
Posts 643 |
'or do they call them footprints now' What a line!! What a poem!! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms az, thanks lady friend _______________ ms page, thank you for he reads |
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