Open Poetry #40 |
Passion Cruise (Duet....long time coming w/ TD) |
Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sweeping the humidity, of a stalled sun bleached day Building caveat of sea air, that now made its way Evening fingers run highlight through brunette flowing back Ninety five route to southbound in pursuits that days lack All the horses purred hard, silver mustang to sport With the top down accenting silhouette in cohort Yet alas, by the wink of a twilight serenade On a beach road, shattered glass her white wall splayed Was pure silk that he spied, from the ground to the stars Stirring thoughts of romance from Mother Earth to Mars. A motor would strain to keep her lips from his reach As cool waters rolled softly in wait of lights breech. His demeanor so cool on an evening so hot So he strolled nonchalant, even though he was not His assistance to offer, with raw muscle and will When she saw him approach, turned her pounding heart still And the mountains would rise to the highest of peaks As desperation brought cries and sleek eagle shrieks For a filly she was, and a bud they would bloom On a lovers worn trail as twin flames lit their room A tire exploded in their efforts to dash And a spare awaited his immediate thrash. For once the jack fell, the bare earth he could see It was time that this lady met a sure pedigree. They would race to the meadow, where each would explore All they’d struggle to restrain that which held back to roar. From a distance drew closer and in eye sight could tell Loves sweet dream awaited just the ring of their bell. |
||
© Copyright 2007 Barry J. Tackett - All Rights Reserved | |||
JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
||
Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Dear Barry and TD I don't know how you guys manage to melt into eachother's words like that...a beautiful way, it is...the story was wonderful! |
||
The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
perfect TD and Barry as I knew it would be |
||
Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
beautiful and truly beautiful. esp love "And the mountains would rise to the highest of peaks As desperation brought cries and sleek eagle shrieks" enjoyed |
||
suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
long time coming... and well worth waiting for! *S* Seamless, superb collaboration! *S* |
||
Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I'm so pleased I stopped in this evening to read. It is so good to see you two dueting once again. ~Hugs to you both, Nancy~ ~ Trace my body with your words, in doing so, you touch my heart ~ |
||
Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Well, I sure can't tell "who wrote what" ... this was seamless, and very much enjoyed. A lovely collaboration! Best wishes, /Kit |
||
⇧ top of page ⇧ | ||
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. |