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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2007-07-10 08:15 AM



These Reasons
Seem Simple Enough

Why am I so...
reluctant
to let go of
hopes and dreams
and sensual things.

When I get attached
I want it to last.

Letting go is tough.

These reasons seem
simple enough.

JamesLee
10July
2007



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ladylisa
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since 2007-04-29
Posts 342
Florida USA
1 posted 2007-07-10 10:51 AM


Excellent!!!!!!  Hopeless romantics have a purpose in this world, we live and breath for hopes of joy and love and it is our nature to never let that go.  When you do, you die inside, and as a hopeless romantic, I am not ready for that road yet.
Moonkist
Member
since 2006-09-29
Posts 197
Pennsylvania
2 posted 2007-07-10 11:37 AM


hopes and dreams and sensual things are what keeps us alive and living... without them, we would be empty shells just existing, and that's no way to live... loved the poem!

Freedom Now

Drauntz
Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905
Los Angeles California
3 posted 2007-07-10 01:20 PM


very true, very true. many do not want to acknowledge it, but it is true.

beautiful

enjoyed

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