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True Love |
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trutodaraiders Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820CA 
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Love is but a sweet caress A gentle touch upon thy breast As flowers fresh in early Spring Or baby birds as they take wing Love will paint the roses hue In vibrant colors graced with dew As sunshine greets the morning sky To kiss the fields of wheat and rye Love is like the ocean's lure Warm, embracing and secure As Winter's clear or warmlit days As misty mountains in the haze Finally, love will test the soul As minutes, days, then years unfold A word of caution brings advice True love requires sacrifice Poetry is just the evidence of life. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very very beautiful and so romantic Bill. Very much enjoyed.  In the midst of winter, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
exactly! |
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trutodaraiders Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820CA |
Enchantress, passing shadows thank you very much *hugs* |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Very enjoyable and romantic, even though with the final words you put your feet again to the ground. Love, Margherita  |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
....and a little sacrifice for love doesn't really hurt. Very well done and going into my library! hugs, Chris Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
So sweet the sentiment in your poetry. Delightful reading. TD |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Absolutely beautiful, and so true. |
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wredgranny Member
since 2006-11-18
Posts 493Ky. USA |
Love is like the ocean's lure Warm, embracing and secure As Winter's clear or warmlit days As misty mountains in the haze OH,MY! Sigi Trutodaraiders each thing you write gives pictures to the spirit,music for souls to dance to and then reminds there must be more than wispy dreams of beauty one must as well be willing to sacrifice to make this work for all!
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
like that "word of caution" Bill beauty of a poem |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
So beautiful! I love romantic poetry. Hugs, Ethel |
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Tom Zart Senior Member
since 2006-05-18
Posts 682 |
You will never sleep alone for long with such words of love within. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
ah my sweet Bill... love does that to you every time! enjoyed as always! RDB |
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arthur Senior Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 678england |
as good as it gets arthur |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
Very well written and classical structure exhibits a style of "Classical Romanticist Poet"... Bravo. My preference. MoonShadow . |
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trutodaraiders Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820CA |
Thanks everyone for taking the time to leave comments. |
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