[my god / is a deadbeat dad]

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Open Poetry #40

[my god / is a deadbeat dad]

shirtless
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since 2006-04-29

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0 posted 2007-07-09 10:26 AM

my god
is a deadbeat dad

my prayers,
paper planes
of bible pages
hurled
from broken stairs

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2007-07-09 11:28 AM

I sure do understand this!

Dominique-Simone
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since 2005-11-12

Posts 643

2 posted 2007-07-09 01:26 PM

Awesome... This is so great

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

3 posted 2007-07-09 02:36 PM

Perhaps you should tell Him...

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane,
I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2007-07-09 05:26 PM

Not sure what you mean by this...
Was your earthly dad a deadbeat dad and so you see God as a deadbeat...or are you saying that God is a deadbeat? James

exhale
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since 2003-06-13

Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

5 posted 2007-07-10 01:54 AM

God this was perfect. In so little you said so much. You make simplicity perfection.

SPIRIT
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since 2002-12-29

Posts 1745
California Desert

6 posted 2007-07-12 10:22 AM

A lot said in a few words...well stated.

Maybe it's time for a heart to heart with Him.

Deadbeat or not though I sure hate to see the word God written all in small letters.

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