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trutodaraiders
Senior Member

since 2006-12-02

Posts 820
CA

0 posted 2007-01-23 07:17 PM

When first I looked into your eyes
each breath became a thousand sighs.
My heart drummed out a thunder beat;
I glowed with joy from head to feet.
The hand of heaven touched my soul,
as destiny's bell began to toll.
The tide of love began to rise,
when first I looked into your eyes.

When first I looked into your eyes,
the world was filled with summer skies.
My sodden clouds, of cold and grey,
glowed with gold, then whisped away.
A brilliant rainbow arched across,
as waves of love began to toss.
The air was filled with lovebird cries,
when first I looked into your eyes.

When first I looked into your eyes,
all time and space were paralysed.
Each second became eternity;
between us lay infinity.
And in that instant I was shown
a universe, I have never known.
I dwell there still, in Paradise,
when e're I look into your eyes.

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

1 posted 2007-01-23 07:57 PM

When first I looked into your eyes
each breath became a thousand sighs

Bill, your words are awesome! RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2007-01-24 11:03 PM

very good!

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

3 posted 2007-01-25 08:02 PM

it's all about eyes Bill
the first time you look into each other's eyes
and neither looks away....
that's the moment
love this

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

4 posted 2007-01-25 08:17 PM

The "eyes" (ayes) have it! Look into the windows of each other's soul, and you will know!

Beautiful write, Dear Bill!

Linda

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2007-01-25 08:30 PM

Mmmm wonderful write!
The eyes are indeed the windows of the soul.
Well done!

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

sewasham
Senior Member

since 2006-09-11

Posts 714
Oklahoma, USA

6 posted 2007-01-25 08:32 PM

Nice write Bill, smooth flow and nice rhymes. Take care and Have fun. Steve

trutodaraiders
Senior Member

since 2006-12-02

Posts 820
CA

7 posted 2007-01-26 11:33 AM

Thank You all for your comments! It is true eyes are the window of the soul

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