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Ten reasons
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Ten reasons |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa 
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In the spotlight this week ten reasons to weep costumed in flowing silk grab centre stage and gyrate like untamed nomadic gypsies. Colourful hues confuse the view and a blink doubles the feel of the purples and greens and blues swirling and whirling and spinning completely out of control. Music entices a body to move but spellbound I stare enthralled which one to choose; they’re all about you like a dream indistinct from the real. Eye witness to this wanton display freezes in situ a body so bound and no magician can conjure the sun to break through the ice into love. Such is the way until another day fills up the stage with good memories and forces the gypsies into the fields to dance their dance for the trees. A gypsy’s not me unless I believe loving you gives me... ten reasons to weep! Helen / 9 July 2007 [This message has been edited by Honeybunch (07-09-2007 12:56 PM).] |
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Robert Jordan Member
since 2007-02-07
Posts 392Philadelphia Pa USA |
Honeybunch, I thought I commented on this yesterday. It must have been erased for some reason. Let's try again. Anyway, I like the way this is written. Very good work. Bobby |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Thank you, Bobby. I've read some of your replies to others and admit to having been apprehensive about your comment to me. Sigh of relief this time.  |
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