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Open Poetry #40

A Number of Ifs

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2007-07-09 12:51 PM

A Number of Ifs

If you called
me right now
I'd tell you
I was missing you.

If I could
see your smile
at this moment I'd
be kissing you.

If love was only hello's
and never goodbye's
I would be with you
looking into your eyes.

JamesLee
09July
2007

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

1 posted 2007-07-09 01:02 AM

see, you can't let yourself have a break-up. Now you sing the song of "missing you." how truly a romantic poet.

felt your "mistake".

enjoyed as always

WindWalker
Senior Member

since 2001-10-12

Posts 1218

2 posted 2007-07-09 01:05 AM

I can feel the longing in the poem. Good writing!!!!

exhale
Senior Member

since 2003-06-13

Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

3 posted 2007-07-10 01:57 AM

Right now, I can completely connect with this poem. Maybe not on your end, but knowing I have someone else on that end. It makes me feel..period, just feel.
Wonderful.

ladylisa
Member

since 2007-04-29

Posts 342
Florida USA

4 posted 2007-07-10 10:56 AM

Oh I have the "If's" bug bad,lol. Loved this one. Feeling is a blessing, even when it is not always a good feeling. At least we have the ability to do so. Lisa

Moonkist
Member

since 2006-09-29

Posts 197
Pennsylvania

5 posted 2007-07-10 11:29 AM

such longing...
such a beautiful write...
such feeling captured here...

Freedom Now

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