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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest 
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desert sun holds me in love and I lie close eyed watching paint from palette soft brown fingers brush lingering in the air wisp of dream only an impression speaking monet in muted blue pink clouds love washed his smile falls on my hand touching each fingertip sleep comes for me and I must leave dusk wakes me to find he has painted the world in my lap a soft yellow kiss on my cheek |
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Dominique-Simone Senior Member
since 2005-11-12
Posts 643 |
And so he paints... imagery of love across your lips. A whisper can only feel this soft. Love your poem and was inspired to say that.. whatever that was. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
YES, this is very very good. A superbly tantalizing write that simply makes the eyes fog and the lip quiver....should I say more? |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
as beautiful as always. and beautiful imaginations. beautiful truly. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
This is Romanticism at its finest! [a grand 'write'!...purest pleasure to read!] serious, sustained applause!! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
oh,my "Monet... in muted blue" Applause! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you so much Drauntz ah poet you know I consider you the romanticist thank you very much thank you for your applause Kacy |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lady~ You are so enjoyable to read~  *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you James Marge thank you dear poetess |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
When I first read this, I realized I might have something that would suit it very well... but when I compared the words to the scene... I don't know... You tell me. can it even touch Love?  |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
certainly comes close Karilea you know how I'm feeling  thank you |
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