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Goldenrose
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0 posted 2007-07-08 03:34 PM



Down fragrant hedged lanes
i looked for it?
Variant green leaves, vibrant
wildflowers, egg yellow
and vermilion.
Hawthorn and Ash, Willow
and Birch, hung with
spiders gossamer filaments.
Verdant verges of
stalking Robins search,
with the pulse of it?
White feathers float through it.
Now i am sick of it,
filled to the top with it?

Ring out, wild bells, to the wild sky, ring out the old, ring in the new,ring out the false, ring in the true..A Lord Tennyson

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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2007-07-09 11:34 AM


Life can get caught in its own sticky spun  threads.
Hmm, perhaps 'yolk' yellow in lieu of egg yellow, to offer a bit of allit allure?

Nightingale
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since 2007-06-21
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Depths of The Unkown, UK
2 posted 2007-07-10 12:21 PM


Enjoyed your conversation
we will chat again.

monster of a poem,
filled with nightmares.

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