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Open Poetry #40

She Loves You

A Beautiful Disaster
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since 2007-01-13

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0 posted 2007-06-09 05:24 PM

She Loves You

She looks at herself in the mirror,
But just your reflection she sees.
She can't be what you want her to be,
And it hurts deep inside.
In front of the mirror she cries,
Calling out your name.
But her tears aren't recalled in your soul.
You're out of reach, and she knows:
Without you her voice
Won't sound the same
When she sings that unfinished love song...
Yes, it's better without an end.

You have given her up, you don't know
That she loves you, but still never shows.
In the shadow of own dismay
Just her secret this love will remain.
She is frightened to see you, but wants to...
And misses you more with each day...
Just open your eyes
And open your heart for her.
She's the light through your darkest night,
Don't let it go away,
For she loves you,
She really does.

aziza
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since 2006-07-09

Posts 2995
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1 posted 2007-06-10 06:04 PM

Lovely

This reads like music

Sad music

WindWalker
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since 2001-10-12

Posts 1218

2 posted 2007-07-09 01:24 AM

Yes, this does read like music!!!!

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2007-07-09 02:26 AM

Silky...James

Jenna
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since 2007-03-20

Posts 180

4 posted 2007-07-09 05:02 AM

I could relate to this so so much.
Love one of your phrases *Her tears wont recall in your soul*

beautiful

A Beautiful Disaster
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since 2007-01-13

Posts 409

5 posted 2007-07-10 11:36 AM

Thanks!

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