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Ebb.(For Bernadette)
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Ebb.(For Bernadette) |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665
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Never...never again... will i hide my heart. Like a sun refracting lake, i have become pellucid. Warm these waters with your presence, glide upon smooth billowing calmness. Peer upon the colours of me, now sun lambent, laid for your eyes. Feathery mist disenthralls a brumal phoenix, trailing a veil across dawns burning backcloth. Ring out, wild bells, to the wild sky, ring out the old, ring in the new,ring out the false, ring in the true..A Lord Tennyson [This message has been edited by Goldenrose (07-10-2007 07:31 AM).] |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
oh my!! Phil! your words are enchanting... I'm just going to check my dictionary for some of the meanings but it was a wonderful write!! enjoyed  RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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lightkeeper Member
since 2006-09-13
Posts 100pluto |
Is this the one ? It soothes me Phil xxx |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I have been away, Phil and have missed your postings~~ They are as lovely as ever...I hope you continue to post M |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Wonderful Imagery.... "dawns burning backcloth." Only one of many. It's impossible to hide your heart and be a good poet. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
grand-fine Romanticism! I am particularly fond of the image: "smooth billowing calmness" serious applause!! |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
beautiful poem for a beautiful person! I wish you both the best! J. M. Barrie, the playwright, may have said it best when he wrote, “God gave us memories so that we might have roses in December.” |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
This lovely poem should keep her "Light" burning brightly for you! You two are so romantic.  Love to you both, Linda  |
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