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Open Poetry #40
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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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Waukegan
0 posted 2007-07-07 08:33 PM

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French fries from above—
Yes, there is a god
For squirrels


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Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905
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1 posted 2007-07-07 08:44 PM

yes. whoever feeds it. the meaning is well said.
but French fries is not very poetic here.
Aloneinmyhead
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since 2007-07-08
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Tennessee
2 posted 2007-07-08 10:34 AM

Cute. I like this
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