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Titia Geertman
Member Ascendant

since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

0 posted 2007-07-07 07:06 PM

I've used each letter
of the alphabet
Combined them
in so many ways

but...

I've not found
the right combination
yet
which will bring me
fame

so...

the best poem
in me
still remains
unwritten

Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

Kit McCallum

Administrator

Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

1 posted 2007-07-07 07:26 PM

What a neat twist Titia. It's a strange thing to think about all our writing as a simple combination of letters ... and yet ... it is! Oddly simplistic and complex all at the same time. Much to ponder here. Loved that!

Best wishes and hugs,
/Kit

paullallady
Member

since 2007-04-03

Posts 262
Michigan

2 posted 2007-07-07 07:54 PM

ahhh hope, eternal and undying. Many of us have that,though you worded it perfecty.

Rick
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia

3 posted 2007-07-07 07:59 PM

Hi Tina, that poem will come when you lest expect it, then your days will be so filled with happiness. Keep writing my friend and it will appear, enjoyed your work here.

Rick

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

4 posted 2007-07-08 01:45 AM

I feel the same way, Titia.

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

5 posted 2007-07-08 04:21 AM

Titia.. I agree with you - beautifully expressed! RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Aloneinmyhead
Junior Member

since 2007-07-08

Posts 30
Tennessee

6 posted 2007-07-08 10:18 AM

This made me laugh...LOL

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

7 posted 2007-07-08 03:49 PM

Titia,
Silly me, I never even knew you desired fame!

But if it matters, I truly enjoy both your writing and your photography. And that way I can report I knew you before you were famous. Cute write.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane,
I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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