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Open Poetry #40

Heart Incensed

poettothecars
Senior Member

since 2006-02-10

Posts 1093
New Zealand

0 posted 2007-07-05 07:39 PM

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Heart Incensed
05 July 2007

Silly is your heart,
an uncertain bequest.
To know love was to give,
where the want was not.

An entangled pride,
energy detracted.
Not to forget, but to begin,
a commitment, His voice.

Understanding the creation,
revolution, an inventory wheeled.
Assets to triumph, a word said,
a love, your love, neither stricken.

Silly was your heart,
fresh was upon your breath.
The starlight an emerald shine,
this spirit if freedom, love, true love.

© 2007 Christopher W Herbert
(a New Zealand Poet)
All Rights Reserved

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paullallady
Member

since 2007-04-03

Posts 262
Michigan

1 posted 2007-07-07 08:05 PM

so tender, touching. wonderful.

aziza
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since 2006-07-09

Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

2 posted 2007-07-07 10:58 PM

This is beautiful. You know, I have missed your poems on these pages.

Alison

poettothecars
Senior Member

since 2006-02-10

Posts 1093
New Zealand

3 posted 2007-07-08 02:20 AM

Thank you both for reading my work and leaving your thoughts.

CWH

a poet who cares

Aloneinmyhead
Junior Member

since 2007-07-08

Posts 30
Tennessee

4 posted 2007-07-08 10:25 AM

Excellent pen. I am impressed

poettothecars
Senior Member

since 2006-02-10

Posts 1093
New Zealand

5 posted 2007-07-08 03:51 PM

Thank you for continuing to read my work, when I am most grateful.

CWH

a poet who cares

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