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I Bow To You
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I Bow To You |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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I've passed the day to evening's song No longer do I feel so strong My skin is parched my bones are arched My fluid mind now feels it's starched And though my powers in decline You still grow flowers on your vine And I'm not reticent to say I love you more each passing day. Time has played its bag of tricks Candles die and burned out wicks But you my love transcend the right My guiding star to guide my flight Your humor is beyond compare A perfect foil my mind to snare Forever bubbling fresh and clean You touched my heart with fruits unseen You are the chaos of my life I bow to you my loving wife |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
Dear sir, how are you? I wish everything was fine with you lately. I love this one just as I loved the one "Isabel". you have a way to write your love very romantically between the lines. Beautiful. and it is much better than many young one's love poem(new ones or classical ones) which are so plain and hallucinated without sense of life. enjoyed your lovely poem for your beloved wife. beautiful truly. have a wonderful weekend, sir Tabin! |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Sey, You're always the guy. What a wonderful collection of poetry your wife possesses. And how blessed we are to be able to read over her shoulder. May there always be ink in your pen and that gentle, loving spirit in your heart.  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Some treasures are simple sensed... and this is full of sensitivity.    |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
You really do know how to reach out and touch someone,don't you? Nice write Sir Sy, you are blessed and so is your bride. |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
You bow to her, Sy. She surely deserves it - As for me, I'd like to send her a great big HUG.. I miss you both...  How about one for each of you... Liz is here visiting, Sy - We'll call to say hello if that's OK.. |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Seymour, this is beautiful my friend, sure the wife loves it as I do you style and talent. Be well my friend. Rick |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
You better bow to her if you know what's good for you  Just kidding Isabel, you're the greatest, and you sure take good care of your man that's for sure. If there were more couples like you two, there would never be such a word as divorce. to you both. Beautifully done Sy. I talked to Nan and Liz today, and we were remembering the great times we all shared on our last visit, that is when I got over that horrible flu remember?  |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Seymour, this is just beautiful. You two are so lucky to have such a special relationship. |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Thank you for sharing such a precious and beautiful part of your life. Alison |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Sir Sy... just beautiful!! RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Your love shines through your words ... as brightly as it shone through your eyes when I met you both, dear Sy. Isabel is a lucky woman indeed. To be loved so completely by a heart as sweet as yours ... now that is a gift beyond compare.  Best wishes and great big hugs to you both, /Kit |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Kit, Thank you dear and all my other dear friends. I am blessed by you all. |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Sy, you may as well keep her...you could do worse. (Now THAT'S a scary thought!)  Love ya, Isabel  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good morning, Sweet T, ~ you've been missed! I am sending a cyber-basket of strawberries, cherries, and a bottle of iced berry wine for you both to share in celebration of your enduring love. I am also including in the basket of dreams, some heavenly candles that will continue to burn forever more!  I am also sending my love and respect to you, Sir Sonneteer, and to your lovely red rose. Oh, and I tucked a piece of my divine angel good cake for each of you to enjoy! Love's 'n hugs 'n angel kisses, Earth Angel xo xo ... |
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Aloneinmyhead Junior Member
since 2007-07-08
Posts 30Tennessee |
How romantic to write for your wife. This is Pretty. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Dear Sy I know you often play to light, this time, most certainly, it's extra bright. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
and I send you bagels and cream cheese a piece of lox you shouldn't be hungry dr brown's cream soda and these words... it is we who are blessed Sir Sy blessed with you and your Isabel |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
And I bow to you,dear sy Isabell is one lucky lady~My spirit will rise |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
and I, too, remember Isabel's sense of humor. You really are a "perfect" match~~ a beautiful poem, Sy M |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
I do so adore your love poems to your wife, Sy! She must adore them, too!!! *hugs*...jo |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
You've written so many beautiful poems... but when you write for or about Isabel, the tenderness and love shine through... and go straight into the reader's heart. *S* So very lovely and loving... big hugs to you both!!! |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Lovely chaos here in your words. Lovely wife, and you, Sir, have such heart. I've missed your poems these past months. And I see by the comments, you have been gone for a bit, too. ~ Karen |
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ivordavies Senior Member
since 2007-01-10
Posts 739Chester, England |
How fortunate when growing old to find that where you placed your soul. It's tended with such loving care that all time's penalties repair. For age improves a love so true that's shared eternally by two. Delining power and burned out wicks are symptoms of life's lesser tricks. Maturity of Mind and Soul with love that's shared ...is mankind's goal. Sey, Or simply, I loved your poem and the experience behind it... Ivor |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Such a beautiful write for your bride. Love you Sy. |
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