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Dominique-Simone
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since 2005-11-12

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0 posted 2007-07-06 06:19 PM

When November called my name,
I laughed a little each morning, weary with ordinary,
filling each day with jam and toast.
The birds carried their tunes muted across white sky,
onto the heels of December. I followed you, down the hole.
I mocked, you mocked
Did we notice?

It was November…my feast began.
you complied a dream weaving straw into gold,
I am not the miller’s daughter. You asked that I understand
pocketing concerns, tending to the urgency of your sorrow
What gilded time you gave.

Silly little child
rebuked I wrapped myself in doubt.
You handed me my lever, we pulled, the earth swallowed
we did not stop

I marked the day; November still hangs undressed on my wall
smothering the rest in silence;
it bears down its power deafening the cries of the impending;
the gloss shines dull, the days have been eliminated
November is calling.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

1 posted 2007-07-06 08:42 PM

sad stuff here

Dominique-Simone
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since 2005-11-12

Posts 643

2 posted 2007-07-07 05:31 PM

Thank you Passing. Yes it is. I wish there was more in my heart right now.

The Lady
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since 2005-12-26

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The Southwest

3 posted 2007-07-07 05:49 PM

"Silly little child
rebuked I wrapped myself in doubt."

good work Page
you speak desolation

Dominique-Simone
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since 2005-11-12

Posts 643

4 posted 2007-07-07 06:13 PM

Thank you Lady I can always count on your opinion.

aziza
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since 2006-07-09

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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

5 posted 2007-07-08 04:22 AM

November still hangs undressed on my wall
smothering the rest in silence

this is wonderful writing .. was writing a poem tonight and used smothering and silence .. gonna have to change it .. (smiles)

Sad and beautiful.

Alison

Dominique-Simone
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since 2005-11-12

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6 posted 2007-07-08 09:39 AM

Again Alison, thank you so much for your kind words

Aloneinmyhead
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since 2007-07-08

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Tennessee

7 posted 2007-07-08 10:11 AM

Yep, I know it, you are really good.

Dominique-Simone
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since 2005-11-12

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8 posted 2007-07-08 05:47 PM

Thanks again Alone.

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