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If Should Come A Time |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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If should come a time you feel the need I'm right here, call on me. Advice? I've truly none to give I can only share the things that I have lived; and how all things in time we come to see are exactly as they should be. I'll share my tales, the highs and lows I'll hold your hand while you shed your woes. We will sit in the sun while enjoying our day, Don't worry about having nothing to say that won't cause you to shed a tear; you see my friend that's why I'm here to simply listen and not criticize. We shall wipe the tears from your eyes so that you can see the truth there is beauty found in you and he can never take that away you don't need him to face another day. If should come a time you feel the need I'm right here, call on me. No more hangin' on to the past No more filling up my tomorrows With yesterday's sorrows No more lookin' over my shoulder {T.Tritt} |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
and right back to you  |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
and you too, m'friend. I just wrote this quick this morning for a friend who had the blues.  Expect an e this weekend sometime k? |
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Dominique-Simone Senior Member
since 2005-11-12
Posts 643 |
This is lovely. Good work. It is always nice to aid in friendship and to know that someone will always be there to cry, laugh, and get angry with. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
e me when you can, I got family coming in so I will be on when I can.  they will be in tonight!  |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
ah very nice enjoyed bernie  A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
that's truly the meaning of 'friend' nice write Donna RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wonderful...James |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Now that is a true friend, indeed, Gentle Spirit. I hope they appreciated it ... because I know I sure did in reading this. Just lovely. Best wishes, /Kit |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
same to you Donna |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I'd say you're getting wise in your old age, but you refuse to age. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I can not think of a finer group of people to call friends. You honor me, each, with your kindness and I am so thankful for the kindred spirits that I have been blessed to come to know here at Pips. And Sunshiney lady, I may get older but I refuse to allow myself to grow old. I am still amazed at times that I have already passed forty-five. Gads, I can remember thinking 45 was OLD!! Love and peace to all, ~D~ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Donna Dearest, I am giving you one humongous hug and pat on the back. ~ Not only for this exquisite piece of soul poetry ~ but for the woman that you are! You are lovely in every sense of the word! ~ and your new pic is a testament to that fact, as well!  This is most assuredly, a  Linda |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
loved it |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"I'll share my tales, the highs and lows I'll hold your hand while you shed your woes." this is what friends do gentle Donna and you do it so well love your new pic |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
I am particularly fond of: “Advice? I've truly none to give I can only share the things that I have lived…” and: “you see my friend that's why I'm here to simply listen and not criticize.” Applause! |
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