Open Poetry #40 |
Shards |
Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
It had rested covered in the corner since that day he saw the reflection of everything he had never wanted to see. Still, it was there staring steadily at him through silent moments. Guilt had greeted him that morning and he had trembled with regret, then lashing out in anger; collapsing in anguish. That was then, this is now and time ever constant, had given him grace of forgiveness along with a fading of yesterdays memories. He fingered the faded fabric feeling the emotions of that day, the sheet, still soft to the touch. Yes, years had granted him grace but there lingered the fleeting moments that would make his mind recall the stir of echoes; seconds filled with his burden of shame as sounds of internal screams and glass shattering, ripped through the silence Years had passed and time had healed wounds. He was alone now, she who had stayed with faithfulness and forgiveness had long ago been taken from this world. This room of memories had remained unvisited since then. Its pull had been urging him, saying, it is time. Yes, time. He reached, uncovering the broken shards of glass no longer afraid of the reflection they held….
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
what a story to read at night. Felt the pain. beautiful poem. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
very well done! serious applause!! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Our guest speaker at church was a Preacher who emphasized letting go the past and moving forward, ever forward.. Your poem holds much of the same message. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Stunning write Donna RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
gosh ouch well, I do love the new pic...the poem is so sad though |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"Yes, time." perfect gentle Donna just perfect hugs to you |
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