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feel me now
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feel me now |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Patience "Do you feel me now?" A breeze is blowing from Nor'east and sheers are blustering our needs: "Tell me, do you feel me now?" I smell coffee. I smell need. Eyelet cotton on the sheets I meet your eyes meet mine in greet: "Tell me do you know me now?" I lick my lips. I hear the tide. I trace my fingers on your back-- I feel you curl you're "you" of mine patience as I lick your lack... Urgency as I, again, take your gentles in between red lips longing for a stream: patience, patience hungrily aching in the feed of this: ~lovely~lovely~ ~loveliness~ "Do you feel me now?" murmer: "Do you feel me now?" Breaking in the arch of greed and NOW oh-now-oh-now-oh-now and then: I bit him, and impatiently "That's it!" (it is) I suckled: "Yes, it is, it's me" in the need as my knees were shuddering thighs of bicker quivering restless in the dark of me: "Do you feel me now...?" I leaned into tomorrow, yesterday, pounding with my bad bad ways: "I think you feel me now." * * * * * |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
whoa lady, again you have rocked these pages of blue with your incredible talent. Much enjoyed this one K.  |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Wow!!! Serenity, your writing is awesome! RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
sitting here looking at the strawberry fields...wondering where your mind goes.. and how it comes back without muddy shoes enjoyed you ms serene |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
Dear SB. beautiful. You are, after all, a very romantic poet. have a very good sleep and a wonderful next day!! |
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Allysa 
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
Awesome, Serenity, simply awesome. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very passionate outstanding work  |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
Yes girl! That's a good one...!!! enjoyed...more than once...! hugs, g "...Never regret anything that made you smile..." |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I'll have what you're having.  |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wow ... I'm not sure I've got that much patience ... you should have seen how quickly I read that, lol. Well done Karen, very much enjoyed! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Jaime Fradera Senior Member
since 2000-11-25
Posts 843Where no tyranny is tolerable |
O, how I would long to be with Karen! But, of course, all of us will have to share, so that each of us can come to know. How could she have known my most intimate and secret thoughts, which I have never shared with anyone? Or is it just imagination? I will keep this for a LONG, long time, for nights where I can play pretend, and fantasize that someone wants me ... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Applauding the poem... and smiling at the replies... you just continue to... outdo.  |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"as my knees were shuddering thighs of bicker quivering" ouch! this hurts so good Karen! you have an amazing talent and I am envious |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
The pleasure was all mine.  Thank you all very kindly for indulging me yet again. and Jaime?  |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karen....you peel the skin back, then lay down with what's under it. Wheew!  |
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Jaime Fradera Senior Member
since 2000-11-25
Posts 843Where no tyranny is tolerable |
Yessssssssssss! It is the middle of the night here on Pleasure Island, what with all the time zones and stuff, but it tells me that in the realm of soul, I sleep with you. :-----) |
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divine chaos Senior Member
since 2006-07-09
Posts 617dancing 'neath the moon |
wow ... just .. wow my dear, you are amazing *smiles* I'm with Kate, I read you with a green eye ~Sheli |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
yes, amazing... is one of the words I use to describe your writes.. but only one...of many |
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