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FunnyBones
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since 2007-07-04
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0 posted 2007-07-04 07:02 PM


Belinda
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recorded song is here:
http://homepage.ntlworld.com/jason.reid4/music/Belinda.MP3


Its been hard I know
been a long walk down a broken road
and you cared for me
you helped me up
when I fell to my knees

I can see you're scared
you've got to be strong
but you're not prepared
but now we'll carry you
while you rest and think things through

because you're
not alone no not at all
though at times it seems like no-ones there
and everything is so unfair you're,
not alone
no not at all
we will stand by you
no matter what you do

and we'll play the game
everything changes and stays the same
and we'll laugh and cry
sometimes we fall and sometimes we fly

and life goes on
we fight the fight and we sing our songs
but you don't give in
before the end you have to begin

because you're
not alone no not at all
though at times it seems like no-ones there
and everything is so unfair
you're, not alone
no not at all
we will stand by you
no matter what you do


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passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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1 posted 2007-07-04 07:22 PM


you are very talented!

I love this song!

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2007-07-04 07:46 PM


Nice...James
FunnyBones
Junior Member
since 2007-07-04
Posts 13

3 posted 2007-07-04 07:55 PM


thank you muchly

just four and a half million more comments like yours and I might regain the courage and confidence to start writing songs again

dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida
4 posted 2007-07-04 09:45 PM


Awesome!  Loved being able to listen to the song...Sounded a little like James Blunt (spelling?) at first!  When it got faster it had an early (very early, "Comic Book Heroes" Album) Rick Springfield sound to it...Anway, it was great

enjoyed~
hugs, g

"...Never regret anything that made you smile..."

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